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Keep Going

Jul 19, 2010 | 684 views | 5 comments

submitted by: Bettina

Charlie sat on the front step of his house, wondering why everything was moving too fast. Today was the day. His 1987 Mazda, a hunk of metal that's been through good and bad and worse, stood with all his belongings loaded in the backseat and on the roof. His entire bedroom fit into this tiny car, and it terrified him.

Ring-ring! Ring-ring! The sound of a bicycle bell caught his attention, and not far away, Charlie saw a little girl biking down the street. Charlie smiled a little, remembering when his dad taught him how to bike. His dad said: "Tell you what. If you think you're gonna lose balance, just ring this bell-" he rang it as so- "And I'll catch you from behind. Okay?"

He was probably seven then. Maybe younger. The scary part was not knowing whether or not he was going to fall. Not knowing if he was going to make it. But Charlie had the bell. If anything went wrong, dad wouldn't be far behind. "That's it!" Dad would yell as he pedaled faster and faster. "Keep going!"

And Charlie did. It surprised him that he never once had to ring that bell.

"Ready to go?"

Dad startled Charlie out of his daydream. He stood over him with a broad smile, but solemn eyes. It wasn't long before mom came out of the house as well, scooping Charlie up into a hug as if he were two.

"Oh," mom said through misty eyes. "You're gonna do so well! Your boss is going to be very happy he hired you."

"I hope so." Charlie sighed. He looked at his dad, feeling his insides melt. "Think I can hack it, dad?"

His dad stepped closer, laying a hand on his shoulder. It was big, strong and kind. After all these years, it hadn't changed at all.

"Charlie, you're gonna do better than hack it," dad said. "I know. I've watched you get here, and you're gonna keep going."

It hit hard- realizing how well dad knew everything even when Charlie hardly said a word. All Charlie could do was throw his arms around the man who was always there. His dad hugged him back, and suddenly the day seemed more bearable.

Charlie got into his car and quickly started the engine before he lost his nerve. He rolled his window halfway down. "Bye!" He yelled.

"Bye!" His parents returned, and mom added: "Don't forget to call!"

He assured her he wouldn't, and was about to back out of the driveway when his dad knocked on the window. He had a small wrapped box in his hand.

"For your desk!" Dad said.

Charlie took the box, and waved one last time before getting on the road. As he approached a stop sign at an intersection of their neighborhood, Charlie glanced at the passenger seat where his dad's gift sat. He grabbed it and carefully opened the lid.

He lost his breath at the object inside:

The bicycle bell.

He laughs and feels his eyes prickle. Gazing through the rearview mirror, he sees his dad still standing on their driveway, watching.

With a smile, Charlie moves his eyes away from what's behind him and focuses on the road ahead.

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Amazing- its the small things in life that strengthens the Back-bone of Will Power.
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Love this story. Brought tears to my eyes.
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it's amazing when people remember the simple things that make life worth living. thanks very much for sharing.
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This reminds me so much of the short films we watch on here =) What a simple but great story.
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as a parent ,i enjoyed the story for i have said similar things t o my daughters when they left for there first jobs out of the area .. good story
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